2014년 10월 25일 토요일

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Jang Yea Yoon
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  Mon. 1pm

Heaundae, Busan

Heaundae Beach is beautiful place this place will fill your heart with love. Heaundae Beach is the famous beach in Korea where it is located at the southeast end of the city of Busan. “The beach is 1.5km long, 30~50m wide, and spans an area of 58,400㎡” (wilkipedia.org). The beach landscape has been picturesque from old times. Haeundae was named by “scholar Choi Chi-Won of the Shilla kingdom” (wilkipedia.org). At that time, he was fascinated by it; however, nowadays many people who are enjoying the blue sea and the fresh air are also attracted by it. It is suitable for three type’s people. First type’s people are lovers. If lovers hold hand and walk barefoot on the Heaundae Beach, they feel deeply in love with each other. Second type’s people are friends. If you want to escape from the city and indulge in a holiday, you should visit and enjoy Heaundae Beach with your friends, so you feel stronger friendship than before with your friends. The last type’s people are family. Heaundae Beach “there are Folk Square where you can enjoy traditional games” (wilkipedia.org). If family enjoys this games, your family members realize yet again just how precious a family is through the games. That is the reason why Heaundae will fill your heart with love.

Heaundae Beach has become an unforgettable place for me. I have lived in France before for two years.While I lived in France, I usually felt lonely because I didn’t have friends. I have never been to France before so, France was unfamiliar to me. Then one day, I decided to go to Korea. Next day, I came home to Korea and visited Heaundae Beach with my friends. I have spent precious time with my friends. At that time, my heart was filled with love, so I didn’t feel lonely anymore. Instead, I was given power of optimism in Heaundae Beach. Through this experience, Heaundae Beach has become my resting place.


Reference

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haeundae_District

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  1. I have been to Heaundea several times. I went to Heaundea four years ago with my friends. It was a beautiful and long beach ,and there were many people to see the beach. I could know the reason that Heaundea was best beach of the korea. I decided to go to the Heaundea with my family again.

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  2. Great response and using present perfect!

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  3. Wow, I have been to Heaundae once. Heaundae beach is very beautiful. It was impressed to me. I love Busan, but Seoul is far long from Busan. I will go to Heaundae beach with my family. Please let me introduce some famous restaurants in Busan for me.

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    1. Heaundae is very nice and wonderful city!! Please visit my hometown~!!
      Thank you to visit my blog!! Have a nice day~~

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