* Writing Practice - 3. (Formatting Paragraph)

Jang Yea Yoon

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My Home Town

 

I would like to tell you about my hometown. My name is Jang Yea Yoon and I'm form Busan. Busan South Korea is a beautiful city because Busan has many beautiful places such as Haeundae, Ganganri, Nampodong, and so on. Among the many places in Busan, my favorite place is Haundae because I live in Haundae and it is located near the beach, and Centum department store. If you come to Haeundae, you must go Haeundae beach and Aquarium. Also, you can enjoy a famous event called 'Busan International Film Festival' held in Busan annually.

 

Busan International Film Festival began in 1996, and has been held in Haeundae and Nampodong every October. So every Korean, even foreigners come to see the festival. This Festival takes place in the theater of the Nampodong and outdoor stage in  Haeundae; if you visit it is a good chance to meet  world famous actors, actresses, and film directors. If you like to watch movies or want to meet famous people, you must visit Busan, and enjoy this festival.

 

* Writing Practice - 2. (Wring 1 paragraph)

  I would like to tell you about my hometown. My name is Jang Yea Yoon and I'm from Busan. Busan South Korea is beautiful city, because Busan has many beautiful place such as Haeundae, Ganganri, Nampodong, and so on. Among them my favorite place is Haeundae, because I live in Haundae and locate near beach and Centum department store. If you come Haeundae, you must go Haeundae beach and Aquarium. Also you enjoy a famous event called 'Busan International Film Festival' is held in Busan annually.

  Busan International Film Festival began in 1996, and has been held in Haeundae and Nampodong in every October. So every Korean, even foreigners come to see the festical. This Festival held in the theater of the Nampodong and outdoor stage in the Haeundae is a good chance to meet directly the world famous actors, actress and film directors. If you like movie o want to famous people, you must visit Busan, and enjoy this festival.

* Writing Practice -1.( Brain Storming)

* Writing Practice - My Home Town (1. Brain storming)

1.  Brain Storming

2. Write Topic sentence, Supporting detail, and Closing

  I would like to tell you about my home town. My name is Jang Yea Yoon and I'm from Busan. Busan South Korea is a beautiful city. Because Busan has many beautiful place such as Haundae, Ganganri, Nampodong, and so on. Among them My favorite place is Haeundae. Because I live in Haundae and locate near beach and Centum department store. If you come Haundae, You must go Haeundae beach and eat 돼지 국밥, It is very delicious. On October, Many famous actors will visit to Haeundae for Busan International Film Festival. So visit my hometown.