2014년 9월 23일 화요일

* Writing Practice -1.( Brain Storming)

* Writing Practice - My Home Town (1. Brain storming)



1.  Brain Storming












2. Write Topic sentence, Supporting detail, and Closing


  I would like to tell you about my home town. My name is Jang Yea Yoon and I'm from Busan. Busan South Korea is a beautiful city. Because Busan has many beautiful place such as Haundae, Ganganri, Nampodong, and so on. Among them My favorite place is Haeundae. Because I live in Haundae and locate near beach and Centum department store. If you come Haundae, You must go Haeundae beach and eat 돼지 국밥, It is very delicious. On October, Many famous actors will visit to Haeundae for Busan International Film Festival. So visit my hometown.

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